it sounds nice, i really like it! i especially like the lack of punctuation :D
I'm a singer, song writer, keyboard...ist, drummer, and a guitarist. on the side i do karate and draw little crappy comics every now and again.
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punctuctuation has no place here.
Subject matter is terrible and I personally hate it, but don't let me stop you. On a more helpful(?) note some of the ryhming seems really forced. Maybe work on that?
idk how its forced since this one kinda flowed. the subject is about my own life expirience. its not how i feel its just what i see people as. its not supposed to bring out positive feeling so of course its not to some people's taste. but thanks for your opinion.
zerogeass
it doesnt suck, i like it actually.
nice job
AndrewTheNinja (Updated )
no one said it sucked